Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Falling Slowly

By South Carolina

Slowly they began to fall,
red, yellow, orange, to brown
as the birds began to fall,
the leaves slowly fell down.

The trees began to go bare,
the sun wasn’t as near,
the trails lead to nowhere,
streets were no longer clear.

Kids were all around the town,
carrying bags of sweets,
some will fall and hit their crown,
dropping all of their treats.


9 comments:

  1. this story made me really think. Words cant describe the brilliance of this poem

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  2. this is the best story ever made

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  3. WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  4. who made this. it was amazing.

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    1. I want to aplaud who mde this

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    2. I want more poems from this person but who is it??????????

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    3. I know who it is they are a great wrighter

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  5. go south Carolina

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  6. What was your insperation

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